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I Met A Girl
Pete Miller
in C

I met a girl,
Just today.
I called for her.
To God I prayed.
She came to me
As sweet as can be.
I think,
I’ve found my self a girl

She’s got curly ringlets and
She likes the Who;
Narrow hips and gentle shoulders,
She gets my song.

I smiled at her.
She smiled at me.
I thought on her;
She preyed at me.
She’ll be mine,
Much sweeter than wine.
I think,
I’ve found my self a girl.

As I was making that
Lamberth turn
I saw those golden letters
Up in the sky

I met a girl,
Just today.
She sat real strange,
Just like I prayed.
She turned to me,
Just to see me.
I think
I’ve found my self a girl.
©2005-2009 ~semolinapilchard
:iconsemolinapilchard:

Author's Comments

this is the first song i ever wrote and finished. it is a fingerpicking instrumental that i worked with in various variations, until one day, i met a girl, and wrote the song
02.09.04

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:iconar-pharazon:
hmm.. interesting... it is very poetic, although I think the last verse is missing something (I don't quite know what, yet). I like.

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"I don't need to a compass to tell me which way the wind shines"
:iconar-pharazon:
Scratch that comment. I finally got the last verse...The whole thing is brilliant.

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"I don't need to a compass to tell me which way the wind shines"

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