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Unfinished Poem
By:  Pete Miller

I see the ocean
Painted in the sky.
I hear the wind blow
A drop near my eye.
I feel the green brush
Crunching at my feet.
Twenty feet suspended,
I shiver in my seat.
And there’s something between my teeth.
©2005-2009 ~semolinapilchard
:iconsemolinapilchard:

Author's Comments

something i started writing and want to finish, i won't because i'll never be exactly in that state, but i love it so much.

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lmao! Was that meant to be funny? Cos I thought it was! :D

No. :skull:
:iconsemolinapilchard:
it was indeed, among other things. i\'m glad i could provide laughter unto you.
:iconar-pharazon:
Thats pretty cool.... I love the ending. Its something clever and short, they make helmets out of it...ahh yes pith... its pithy!

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"I don't need to a compass to tell me which way the wind shines"

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February 12, 2005
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